Bradley Holden waxed eloquently about the gray dimpled pill he held between his thumb and fore finger…
The two men were sitting harbor-side on Pelican Landing in a back private corner of the Men’s Grill at the Peninsula Country Club. The day was sunny and bright as they occasionally glanced out the great picture window at the water and the boats in their slips. Each man was six feet, forty years old, slender, handsome, the one about to speak with blond and wavy hair, the other, with black, curly, cultured neatness.
“It’s beyond amazing, Kurt, it’s beyond revolutionary, the greatest little capsule invented by man. You cannot breathe a word of this to anyone, not even Nancy or your parents. We’ve been best buddies since grade school, and I have to share this with you. No one else knows about this except the genius who must remain anonymous. You have to promise me you will not speak of it, okay?”
“Sure, I promise. I’ve never seen you so excited about any of your pet projects.”
“Not pet projects, Kurt. That sounds so child-like. You’ve done very well with the private information I’ve given you in the past. Sure, a few ideas didn’t pan out, but I gave you the caveats at the time, right?”
“You did. That’s why I promise because you are an incredible mover and shaker. Now, what is this tablet going to do for me and the world?” Kurt smiled and sipped his vodka-tonic.
“Not yet the world, old buddy, just you…and stop with the silly smile. This is more important than you realize. Now, look carefully at me. Really look and analyze. Don’t glance. What can you see?”
After a long interval, Kurt spoke. “I can see the same incredibly handsome pal who sat with me last week at this same table.”
“C’mon, Kurt! I’m asking you to be serious here.”
“I am being serious. Except for your clothing, I notice the same you.”
Bradley sighed. “Okay, remember the boat and fishing accident when the big Bluefin knocked me down and caused a gash in my left forehead? Remember the scar? Remember the big brown wart on my right cheek below the ear? Do you see a scar on my forehead? Do you see the wart?”
Kurt looked befuddled. “In fact, I don’t…sorry, I’m so used to seeing you I didn’t think about the scar and wart. You telling me the pill took the scar and wart away?”
“That’s what I’m telling you…but even more. Don’t you think I look younger?”
Kurt squinted. “Damn! I thought you got a short haircut, but your face does look smoother and tighter. Same pill do that?”
“That’s right, buddy, and there’s even more.” He smiled at his friend, sipped slowly his own vodka-tonic, enjoying the waiting game he was playing.
“Okay, smart guy, what’s ‘even more’?”
“Even more is, taken at the frequency directed, I will never get older than I am right now at this moment.”
“Brad, you’ve got to be kidding! This is science fiction, all impossible stuff you’re saying.”
“Just listen for a minute or so, okay? Some Scientists and some in the Tech world have been working in a field called microrobotics and nanorobots. I can’t tell you much about it, but, supposedly, some years from now those little nano-rascals will have different duties, will be injected into our veins to remove old cells, create new cells, fix medical problems like cancer, diabetes, alzheimers, and so forth… Guess that signals some sense of immortality. It’s all amazing.
“Now, my guy is ahead of the curve. His pill has some cell cleanup and anti-aging capabilities. He’s a Cal Tech graduate and the sharpest man I know…well, you’re pretty sharp, too.” He smiled and nodded toward his longtime pal.
“Hold up, Brad, this cannot be legal what you’re doing. How long have you been taking these pills? Are there any side effects? Are you just going on blind trust? Incidentally, there was nothing un-charming about your scar and wart. So, the big question is WHY would you do this?”
“Aside from you, Kurt, this gentleman is my best friend… He did not want me to be his guinea pig. I sort of stole some of his pills…”
“Sort of stole?”
“He needed validation for his studies. All animal and other tests had been done but the human element… I supplied that for him.”
“And he let you? Brad, this is nuts!”
“He didn’t know about it and was mad as hell when I told him. You know me, I’m a risk taker.”
“Yeah, but with something weird like this! Is he not worried about your health?”
“I started two weeks ago…they are once a week pills. He seems to think I’m fine and is happy as the chirping lark.” Brad raised his arm to the waiter for two more vodka tonics.
Kurt shook his head and kept looking at his friend as though seeing him for the first time. The two men were quiet until the drinks arrived. A strange osmosis was taking place, and Kurt could not quite understand it. “Well, I love you, buddy, and I hope you’re not screwing around with fate.” He raised his glass for a toast.
As they sipped their toast drink, Kurt noticed a tightness come to Brad’s face and scalp – Brad’s hair seemed to be shaking and shimmering in the afternoon light.
“My God! Brad, are you okay? Your face…it’s…”
“I don’t know, buddy, I’m feeling funny! I need to leave…sorry…guess I’m…” With that, Brad stood and started toward the exit.
Kurt stood, followed, and, after the second step Brad wavered and crumpled into Kurt’s arms. Suddenly, Brad’s body became limp in his arms. Then, Kurt’s eyes widened with horror as the mass he held in his arms began to shrivel and become lighter until he was holding loose clothes and a further diminishing Bradley Holden. Kurt opened his mouth to scream but no sound would come. He stood, tears streaming down his face and onto the clothes of his best friend. His body trembled and his mind considered the possibility he was having a nightmare.
The faces of the lone bartender, waiter, and a few scattered members all blanched with disbelief and froze in fear.
A cloud settled under the mid-afternoon sun, presenting through the big window a bleak tableau of people in shock and gray stillness.
Flash Fiction by Billy Ray Chitwood
14 thoughts on “Forever Youth”
Excellent, and a little scary too.
Thanks, David… Means a lot… Indeed, very scary! My best wishes.
Wow. Nice science fiction horror stuff, Bill. Thanks. Really enjoyed it.
As always, good buddy, your comments make my day… Incidentally, now living in Kentucky — will send a pic when all settled. My best to you and the family.
I really enjoyed this story, Billy. You had me hooked from the start. Well done!
Thanks, sweet Jill. Your lovely comments always ‘ring my bell’. 🙂
Great story, Billy Ray. I was wanting one of those tablets until the end! 😀
Thanks, Dianne — Hey, I wanted one, too! 🙂
Darn it, Billy Ray. I really wanted that pill to work! Great suspense, lovely 😉
I’ll make one for you that DOES work! 🙂 Thanks for liking! xox
Great to meet you, Billy Ray, and such an interesting piece of flash fiction. Kinda knew it couldn’t end well, but very well written!
Thanks for your kind words. Wishing you the very best.
So now we know what may happen if we go chasing after the pill of youth…
When all is said, who truly knows? 🙂