A moment of sweet reflection came to me – just wanted to share it with you.
My wonderful grandfather was a section foreman on the Louisville and Nashville Railroad line. In youth I lived for awhile in the old gray two-story section house with my grandparents. The house was no more than a hundred yards from the railroad tracks. Lying in bed each night as the train whistle blew in the distance, my mind would consider where it could be my life was leading me.
The sound of the train whistle has always brought to me an inscrutable soft sadness.
Hope you enjoy the reflection…
The Lonesome Train Whistle
It always came during the night
as mind was most vulnerable,
as fancy replaced reality.
It came and brought tears
of truths that were days
of poignant youth.
It came whispering of all
dreams yet possible to heal
pangs of longing.
It came on evening’s air,
took me to a place
ordained for me to go.
Its long mournful wail
lingered long and tender
like a mother’s feathery kiss.
The sound echoed long, its final
note lost in space
not known by me,
And my days would be softly
blessed in the verity
of those splendid sounds,
That, indeed, life was yet
to be out there on the
lonesome train’s whistle.
BRC – 12/12/2003
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This is beautiful, Billy. The sound of a train’s whistle has always made me feel homesick.
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Thank you, Sweet Jill. Merry Christmas and Happy New Year!
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Wishing you and your family peace and joy in the new year, Billy. Merry Christmas!
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Sad but beautifully written, Billy Ray, thanks for sharing,
eden
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Ah, the bittersweet of life! It’s so easy sharing, particularly to dear ones like you, ‘My Girl’ – MERRY CHRISTMAS AND HAPPY NEW YEAR! xox
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I have to say I love the sound of a train passing in the night, carriage windows lit up and people going somewhere. Then again we also lived across from a shunting yard for a year, the only peace we got at night was on weekends. Great piece though Billy.
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Thanks for your good response. I can only imagine the grating sounds you must have endured back in the day of the shunting yard… Best wishes and HAPPY HOLIDAYS.
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The empty coal wagons hurtling along half a mile of track, then banging against the big bumpers at the other end, BONG! Other than that you got used to it. A Merry Xmas to you and yours Billy Ray.
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Thanks, Jo, for the nomination — you honor me… I’m working on my 12th book and trying to keep up with the social network activities so I shall pass on all the requirements needed to receive the reward… just not enough time in the day. Again, much thanks for thinking of me. Best wishes – Billy Ray
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